Freytag's Tirangle.

My novel in relation to Freytags Triangle is a little more angled in one direction. It has the rising complicated part almost all the way untill the end of the book. With the 2 worlds and all the people just trying to figure it out, and the power issue with the jiffy scuttler. The excitement is connected to the gap in space, the tense part is just as they find it and then the climax is when the power supply is increased and then they cant figure out what to do to shut it down. The resolution is short, not having much of an impact because all the excitement is just before then. The downplayed effects though is just as long as the resolution, it just ended without much extent to the entire story. With the gaps being worked out and the chronologically frozen bibs sorted. Everything soon was back to normal with the shock and aww of the people. The unity action was not very unified, it was all jumbled to the end of the story.

Lately in the World.

While everyone is trying to find out why the crack is staying open, others are wondering how could it be. The only other explaination of it staying open is that there is another power source on the other world holding it up. But how did the other world know that this world would open the crack again? So some how the other world has left or put up a power supply that would hold the crack open. But this world is trying to figure how they new that they would be back and they should leave the power supply up. Strange scenario, for the people in this world. Similarly aspecting the stages that extend that ideas of characters. Because in one world you have the original people, in the other world you have the ones that have died, so the crack in space is not only a location but a time worping "thingy". This seperates the "this world people" from the "other world people" similarly to the chronologically frozen bibs. Being frozen for years to come or alive and kicking today.

2 Worlds beyond this world.

In my book a Crack in Space. When they found that crack when the jiffy scuttler malfunctioned the crack was small. And the jiffy scutler didnt have very much power at the time. By this time though already they have moved the Cronaginicly frozen bibs to this other world. Then they stopped transporting them for a while to increase the power to make the crack bigger. What they didnt realize is that when they boosted the power to make the crack bigger the world had changed. It wasnt the same time zone or year. They sent another satellite up to record more data and everyone is stunned at this point. They soon realized that its the same planet but 100 years in the future after they put some people over on that planet. They record that everyone has died. So know they tried to take off the power supply but the crack stayed open and now they are trying to figure out why.

This reminds me of how Luke is in denile that Vader is his father because the shock and aww of it. Like the planet being changed so drastically. Not everyone know what the big deal is yet. When they do its all going to change, Luke and Vader, the two seperate timezones. The change of everyones thoughts of what is going to happen.

My ideas! What I think! What I dont think! What is going on? Read the comments for the post.

The Star Wars My style.

Characters have their own unique styles. Like Han Solo he has his uniqueness because he is supposed to be this ruthless bounty hunter guy, but during the movie he put the comic relief effect in there. Like just how he is portrayed in them. It fits to the exact theme of what it should be like.

And the droids they put that comic effect in there too, just in the robotic way. Like C3PO and R2-D2 talk to each other, and C3PO is always calling R2 stupid and dumb and just being like a bully to it. While R2 doesnt care its saying that they are like humans, having the more power or higher ranking sort of thing. So they are like the entire little story makers that are aside from the rest of the story going on.

Like Vader, he is the evil guy of course. Trying to get to Luke and Leia, we dont realy know what he wants with them. All we can guesture is that he wants to kill them. Eventhough we really have no idea thats what they think too.

What I think is that this is stupid, I heard in the movie that Han could be have gone to the other side of space. Whoa, hold up space is never ending. What happened here? Im so lost. They put that in the story just to say that they have no clue where Han is. It puts the wonder in the space odyssey of the entire fleet of Vaders control. Its like a big mystery.

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Characters are WHAT?

As of lately I have realized that Briskin the one who has the secrets hes keeping from everyone and only tells his secrets at certain times. While on the other hand, he is the one with no slack he likes to be in the middle of the business. Sam Heim his no longer campaign runner is regreting just a bit that he left like he did. So he has the since of confusion in what he wants to be doing at the moment. The director of the journey to the new planet is in control of most everything that is going on there and is like a manager for the company that sorta sponsored the trip. But the people that he brought with him are just different. One guy is worried and wants to go back home, and patch the entrance to this planet. So he is scared, no real forceful ideas on him. While some of the other ones are actually wanting to be in and get down and dirty with finding out what they can. Like how did they destroy the QB satelite if they were as primative as they think? Also they captured or took I should say someone back with them. Everyone is looking and trying to be the one to ask questions. They are so curious.

Whats going on?

Briskin has just flown onto the planet. The scientists say that the satellite has been destroyed or is not functioning properly any more. They think it was destroyed more likely, but they wonder how could it have been destroyed. The people/things on this planet have no real scientific items. When flyiing on the scuttler the woodsailing thing they found is really old fashion and not advanced. At this moment the people that have seen this planet are having great issues on what to do. Having

Briskin may be in big trouble!

In these past few chapters some of Briskins hired people went to this new earth place. Some scientists and smart people. Along with some higher ranking people. They even hired this sort of bounty hunter that is going to be a guide of some sort. First of all they released a satellite to survey the planet. Then everyone landed. At first they just did satellite searches, and came up with some information about the planet. Somethings they came up with are that its very similar to their own planet. The land masses are very much the same shape and everything. The difference though is that the lights are not the same. The scientists are trying to figure out what time frame this planet could be in. Because it is so much like their earth. When its dark you can see the lights of the masses of people, but the light masses show that most of the high lighted places are not like they should be. In other words the mass of the people that they think are there live in other parts than if it was their earth.

Another great find is that they took a scuddler to survey around where they were. I mean the people scientists, guide, and just some higher friends of Briskin. Well what was following them was a flying wood like boat thing. They didnt know much about it so they just turned around and it landed soon after that. More to come......

Who is it gonna be?

Who is it gonna be? Briskin the first black man that may be elected for president was almost killed. Since his last TV speech, everyone has been really skeptical but really wanting this new planet to work out. No one knows much about it at the moment. The guy that controls the sleeping and the virgins will be out of a job because Briskin is planing to move them all or move everyone else to the new planet. So at this time Briskin is getting help, and trying to not be seen. Also the one in control of the sleepers, people who have been put to sleep to be awaken at another time, the controller of these people have been stealing body parts from them to put to use on a living person. So at this moment when and if Briskin is voted to president and he moves the sleeping everyone will find out that around 500 sleeping will not awake. So it is a bad lil moment for everyone.

No faith or faith.

Once upon a wild dream in a place long long from here I mean in the future long, we are going to have the closest election in time. One that involves a black man, Briskin. If he were to be elected then he would be earths first black president. Lots of people have faith in him, but some have their doubts that he would serve as a good president. Except now he has information of this other planet that is realy similar to earth, and he thinks that he will solve the problem of the virgins. He soons realize that people know have faith in him. Before this he was really weary of what to expect, because after all he could be the first black president. Know as he tries to get the word out there about having found this similar earth like planet, he has the faith of the people. Some of his more closer friends lost some faith because now if it backfires he has nothing to recoil on. The faith of him being or not being president lies alone on the voters, without the faith of them, then he has no faith of himself to be president, because he know has the faith since he has found this earth like planet.

A little late, but its still up here.

To all the people in this universe what is there sole purpose to live? To us, living is just something we do. I mean we are this itsy bitsy planet. With not really any say to any other part of this universe or any other. So why do humans live, why does anything live for that matter. We are put on this planet for what purpose.

It brings up the point like in "THE STAR" why are stars blown up or blowing up? Did or could the planets/things complete there purpose of what they were intended? If the "things" on that planet did complete the task, why would god destroy them, they served the purpose that god intended.

So any idea what we are put on this planet for, if we have a purpose of being here, and not just for living? If we happen to complete that purpose, will earth be the next nova?

And if earth is the next nova, will any other planet see us?
I dont really understand something though, if the earth could emplode/explode does that mean the moon can too?

Da Star

Does the writer think that Earth could be the next planet to go? And if so would he/she have any idea when?

The religious views of the people show that they doubt god, then why are they religious?
They would like to think that the destroyed will go to heaven, but that just deafeats the purpose of why would god destroy them. I mean the point of them living their on that planet or dead in heaven is pointless. So why does he do it?

How far are they away from their own planet, Earth seems to be not even remotely close to where they are.

They talked about getting and giving their found studies to the colleagues, so they must be excited about what they have found. Being that they are sad about the other exploding planets.

WOW! such news

The next chapter that I just read has pretty cool information. Briskin the first black man that might be president just got info on the new planet. No one else knows about it. The planet is similar to earth, it can sustain human life. He just aired a speech to the people about it, and he says that now he will move all the virgins to the other found earth. Because what is happening is that people who get pregnant want to become bibs, which are like frozen/dead people that can come back alive. And now he has told the people that he can change this and relocate people to the other earth. During this speech people are talking about what this would do to their jobs. The abortion advisor would be out of a job, and the bib controller would hurt greatly from this. Everyone on the edge wondering.

Today is wild!

In the past few pages I read, a black man Briskin is running for president. He had a campaign runner that did all of his work, but lately Briskin has been trying to do away with all the sleeping/dead people. But his campaign runner said that there is no way this can happen. And Briskin wont take no for an answer to the campaigner quit, and he has been ready to quit for a while.