Freytag's Tirangle.

My novel in relation to Freytags Triangle is a little more angled in one direction. It has the rising complicated part almost all the way untill the end of the book. With the 2 worlds and all the people just trying to figure it out, and the power issue with the jiffy scuttler. The excitement is connected to the gap in space, the tense part is just as they find it and then the climax is when the power supply is increased and then they cant figure out what to do to shut it down. The resolution is short, not having much of an impact because all the excitement is just before then. The downplayed effects though is just as long as the resolution, it just ended without much extent to the entire story. With the gaps being worked out and the chronologically frozen bibs sorted. Everything soon was back to normal with the shock and aww of the people. The unity action was not very unified, it was all jumbled to the end of the story.

Lately in the World.

While everyone is trying to find out why the crack is staying open, others are wondering how could it be. The only other explaination of it staying open is that there is another power source on the other world holding it up. But how did the other world know that this world would open the crack again? So some how the other world has left or put up a power supply that would hold the crack open. But this world is trying to figure how they new that they would be back and they should leave the power supply up. Strange scenario, for the people in this world. Similarly aspecting the stages that extend that ideas of characters. Because in one world you have the original people, in the other world you have the ones that have died, so the crack in space is not only a location but a time worping "thingy". This seperates the "this world people" from the "other world people" similarly to the chronologically frozen bibs. Being frozen for years to come or alive and kicking today.

2 Worlds beyond this world.

In my book a Crack in Space. When they found that crack when the jiffy scuttler malfunctioned the crack was small. And the jiffy scutler didnt have very much power at the time. By this time though already they have moved the Cronaginicly frozen bibs to this other world. Then they stopped transporting them for a while to increase the power to make the crack bigger. What they didnt realize is that when they boosted the power to make the crack bigger the world had changed. It wasnt the same time zone or year. They sent another satellite up to record more data and everyone is stunned at this point. They soon realized that its the same planet but 100 years in the future after they put some people over on that planet. They record that everyone has died. So know they tried to take off the power supply but the crack stayed open and now they are trying to figure out why.

This reminds me of how Luke is in denile that Vader is his father because the shock and aww of it. Like the planet being changed so drastically. Not everyone know what the big deal is yet. When they do its all going to change, Luke and Vader, the two seperate timezones. The change of everyones thoughts of what is going to happen.

My ideas! What I think! What I dont think! What is going on? Read the comments for the post.

The Star Wars My style.

Characters have their own unique styles. Like Han Solo he has his uniqueness because he is supposed to be this ruthless bounty hunter guy, but during the movie he put the comic relief effect in there. Like just how he is portrayed in them. It fits to the exact theme of what it should be like.

And the droids they put that comic effect in there too, just in the robotic way. Like C3PO and R2-D2 talk to each other, and C3PO is always calling R2 stupid and dumb and just being like a bully to it. While R2 doesnt care its saying that they are like humans, having the more power or higher ranking sort of thing. So they are like the entire little story makers that are aside from the rest of the story going on.

Like Vader, he is the evil guy of course. Trying to get to Luke and Leia, we dont realy know what he wants with them. All we can guesture is that he wants to kill them. Eventhough we really have no idea thats what they think too.

What I think is that this is stupid, I heard in the movie that Han could be have gone to the other side of space. Whoa, hold up space is never ending. What happened here? Im so lost. They put that in the story just to say that they have no clue where Han is. It puts the wonder in the space odyssey of the entire fleet of Vaders control. Its like a big mystery.

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Characters are WHAT?

As of lately I have realized that Briskin the one who has the secrets hes keeping from everyone and only tells his secrets at certain times. While on the other hand, he is the one with no slack he likes to be in the middle of the business. Sam Heim his no longer campaign runner is regreting just a bit that he left like he did. So he has the since of confusion in what he wants to be doing at the moment. The director of the journey to the new planet is in control of most everything that is going on there and is like a manager for the company that sorta sponsored the trip. But the people that he brought with him are just different. One guy is worried and wants to go back home, and patch the entrance to this planet. So he is scared, no real forceful ideas on him. While some of the other ones are actually wanting to be in and get down and dirty with finding out what they can. Like how did they destroy the QB satelite if they were as primative as they think? Also they captured or took I should say someone back with them. Everyone is looking and trying to be the one to ask questions. They are so curious.

Whats going on?

Briskin has just flown onto the planet. The scientists say that the satellite has been destroyed or is not functioning properly any more. They think it was destroyed more likely, but they wonder how could it have been destroyed. The people/things on this planet have no real scientific items. When flyiing on the scuttler the woodsailing thing they found is really old fashion and not advanced. At this moment the people that have seen this planet are having great issues on what to do. Having